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https://youtu.be/pwsSidzOSvw
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I think the most insightful advice was to stay focused on what I was talking about also to keep my voice high and excited at all times. I didn't receive any type of weird feedback, but I did receive a lot of good feedback. People loved the product as well as my pitch.
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I changed a lot of my visual contact and the eye contact I had.
Hi Matthew,
ReplyDeleteGood job on your elevator pitch #2. I liked the lighting in this video opposed to the prior video, it seemed to offer the viewer a better angle for eye contact. I appreciated all the information you poured into this pitch. You went into detail explaining a lot of the benefits of your product and you described what set your product apart of the competition, namely that you offer natural sourced ingredients. You did a great job explaining that this product is for gym enthusiasts, but I what I didn't hear is if this product can be used by everyone in terms of gender. Is your product viable for female body builders?
Keep up the good work as we gear up to refine and do Elevator Pitch #3.
Best Regards,
Suzanna
One more suggestion: I did appreciate how you included the link to the video in the text of your second pitch, but preferred how your Pitch #1 video was embedded into the blog. Maybe on Pitch #3 you can do both, list the link and embed the video.
ReplyDeleteTake Care,
Suzanna
Hey Matthew.
ReplyDeleteGreat video quality for your pitch. The image is bright and clear which really makes it easy for me to continue watching. It even increased my mood a little. I think you provided a lot of great detailed information in your pitch, which can be very important. My only suggestion would be to possibly remove all items from your pocket for your next video. That one pocket was just a little distracting. But thank you so much for a great example of an elevator pitch.